How beautifully you have woven the complexity of human emotions. Each line is a reminder of how we are all intertwined, carrying our own stories and tensions, yet finding strength in unity.
Thank you Moorea - Together we are beautiful. I have had far too much negativity from the news and needed to write what I still believe humanity looks like.
This is beautiful, Monica. That line about entering as unfinished threads really stayed with me. And the ending… woven from what breaks and still capable of beauty. So good. 💛
Steena, I am so glad this found you today. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. We need a reminder that together we are the beauty in this world. So much negativity lately. I think this was my way to remind myself and others.
How beautifully you have woven the complexity of human emotions. Each line is a reminder of how we are all intertwined, carrying our own stories and tensions, yet finding strength in unity.
Thank you Aaliya - together we are stronger and that is the beauty of humanity.
What a beautiful poem! Your words echo truth while evoking imagery.✨️
Thank you.
This is so beautiful, how humans are so different yet so same.
Thank you Pratishtha
“We cross, again and again” love it.
I’m so glad you enjoyed this
Lovely, Monica. There is a meaning here that some of our world leaders might want to heed
Yes, so true. It was written from a place of too much news and negativity. So you are spot on.
So cool
I am glad you liked this one
What a beautiful metaphor!
Thank you Moorea - Together we are beautiful. I have had far too much negativity from the news and needed to write what I still believe humanity looks like.
Lovely treatment of a well chosen analogy!
Thank you Sarah - I wrote this while thinking we need to focus on all of the good things in this world. Together we are a beautiful woven tapestry.
Yes, more good than bad I reckon!
Very nice!
Thanks Robert
Beautiful insight and even better metaphor. Thank you.
Thank you Kevin - I appreciate your kind words.
Great imagery.
As someone who grew up in the Mill City of Lowell, MA, we were always taught the importance of the loom!
I love that - We need a reminder every now and then.
And threads can unravel. You pull on one and the rest will follow. Loved it.
Skillfully penned with a most striking ending: 'and still capable of beauty.' <3
Thank you Petra, together we are what makes this world beautiful.
Yes :) <3
This is beautiful, Monica. That line about entering as unfinished threads really stayed with me. And the ending… woven from what breaks and still capable of beauty. So good. 💛
Steena, I am so glad this found you today. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. We need a reminder that together we are the beauty in this world. So much negativity lately. I think this was my way to remind myself and others.
Whatta piece 👏👏👏👏
Enjoyed reading thoroughly 🫶💯
💜☮️💜☮️
Loved the poetry,loved the image,so moving imagery 🫶
Thank you Hina