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Alix@IN2LPdS's avatar

As I kept reading, it started to feel like the library wasn’t a real place, but more like a reflection of your own patterns how you think, how you hesitate, how you repeat things while convincing yourself you're making new choices.

What really stayed with me was that moment of awareness.

You realize you might be stuck in a loop… but at the same time, even that realization feels like something that’s already been anticipated. That’s where it gets uncomfortable.

It doesn’t tell you “change” directly...

Instead, it just shows you the pattern—again and again—until you can’t ignore it anymore.

Monica A Leyva's avatar

So glad you had fun with this one.

Alix@IN2LPdS's avatar

Hi Monica, I really had fun and enjoyed it! Thank you so much!😊

Aaliya's avatar

Monica this surreal and captivating The atmosphere is masterfully crafted, drawing the reader into a world where reality is fluid and unsettling.

Monica A Leyva's avatar

So happy you enjoyed this. Thank you.

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I read this less as a physical space and more like a psychological loop. It felt like this unconscious repetition that looks like choice, but isn’t really. The part that stayed with me most was that moment of awareness, where you realise you could break the pattern, but also that you’re part of the system you’re trying to escape.

Monica A Leyva's avatar

You are exactly right. Thanks for reading.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Libris, Edmund gave me goosebumps..! Of course the library already had him filed. >.<

Monica A Leyva's avatar

I mean would you expect any less from me?

Monica Fernandes's avatar

Twilight Zonish. Very good. Loved the back and forth dialogue.

Monica A Leyva's avatar

Thanks Monica. I forgot I had this one scheduled. Glad you found it interesting and in the Twilight Zone them.

Monica Fernandes's avatar

So good

Dean M's avatar

Fabulous fiction !

One can feel the fabric of Monica her writing, bending stories like she bends Space within a story...