Some observations not included, indeed. I'm intrigued to find out why the reporter's leaving out observations. As a state worker, the bureaucratic language felt very well done on a satirical level. Also, Sorrel Ashwick is a dope name.
I am so glad you are seeing the echo selections as a valuable addition. My intention is to give the reader insight to the characters thoughts. Each chapter is structured this way.
In my mind I almost watch this like a split-screen. It's reminiscent of Clint Eastwood's companion pieces "Flags of Our Fathers" and "Letter from Iwo Jima".
Some observations not included, indeed. I'm intrigued to find out why the reporter's leaving out observations. As a state worker, the bureaucratic language felt very well done on a satirical level. Also, Sorrel Ashwick is a dope name.
So glad you are enjoying this. Keep me posted as you follow the series.
I like how this is developing. On one day, we are looking through Sorrel's eyes, and the next through Mrs. Ivers'.
I am so glad you are seeing the echo selections as a valuable addition. My intention is to give the reader insight to the characters thoughts. Each chapter is structured this way.
In my mind I almost watch this like a split-screen. It's reminiscent of Clint Eastwood's companion pieces "Flags of Our Fathers" and "Letter from Iwo Jima".
That is a great way to put it.